Thursday, April 24, 2008
How to stretch
If you want your health body, don't forget flexibility, strength, and endurance. I will introduce others next time.
Family and Success outline
Family and Success
“You don’t choose your family. They are God’s gift to you, as you are to them” (Desmond Tutu). My elder sisters, Minhee Lee and Juhyung Lee, have a lot in common in their interests, value, and the lessons I learned from them, yet their portray show the difference in many ways.
2nd paragraph:
1. Minhee Lee and Juhyung Lee have a lot in common in their interests, reading and weekend trips, but they portray in different ways.
2. Minhee Lee likes to read a book at home whenever she is fee.
5. Juhyung Lee also is a supporter of reading like Minhee Lee.
8. Juhyung Lee loves to go a short trip every weekend.
10. Minhee Lee also likes to take a short trip every weekend.
14. They say to me all interests give more energy to live as a look-for rainfall during dry season.
3rd paragraph:
1. Minhee Lee and Juhyung Lee also make much of family and success as the most important value, but they have a lot difference in their portray looking closely.
2. First, Juhyung Lee always says family is one of the most important things.
5. Second, Minhee Lee thinks her family means everything to her.
8. Third, Minhee Lee says success is the key to get somewhere.
10. Forth, Juhyung Lee thinks success is the important base of happiness.
14. I think I’m really lucky to have my sisters who give me good model.
4th paragraph:
1. The lessons I learned from my sisters, Minhee Lee and Juhyung Lee, are the importance of love of family and social activity but they say to me how much important love of family and social activity are for happiness in different ways.
2. Juhyung Lee shows me the importance of love of family that family is like the water for grain during the spring.
5. Minhee Lee says she has nothing but her family in her life.
8. I learned from Minhee Lee what I do for the relationship with others.
10. I also learned social activity are necessary for success that is the key to get somewhere from Juhyung Lee.
14. One day, when I think my life closing my eyes, I’m standing on my way that they showed me and I keep going with others’ hand.
Conclusion:
My sisters, Minhee Lee and Juhyung Lee, have many similarities in interests, value, and lessons I learned, but they portray in different ways.
Sunday, April 20, 2008
The Chase written by Annie Dillard
What is the most important thing in your life? Love, or family? I think my family is the most important value to me. However, I never thought it seriously. According to Annie Dillard’s “The Chase,” she said to me that each individual has his own personal values and tries to do best mentally and physically to get it. There’re a lot of personal values in childhood and these values tend to change differently depending on the individuals when they grow up.
I think one of Annie Dillard’s values in childhood represented in this essay is excitement, this value, the excitement, is changed to sociality, and that is because she learned the rule or law to obey in the society. First, one of Annie Dillard’s values in childhood is excitement obtained by doing something regardless of fair or unfair. I think most children pursue just the excitement by doing something such as playing football, or baseball, but they don’t care whether it was fair or unfair to do it. For example, Annie Dillard and her friends in childhood liked to throw snowballs at passing cars in her essay. Second, her value changed the excitement into the sociality through running with a driver. I think the sociality means people think more importantly the relationship between others and they have to obey the social rules for the sociality. When she was running away from him first, she was doing it for her life. However, she realized and felt another excitement to obey the rule and concentrate on her soul and body during the game with him. Third, her value changed the excitement into the sociality because she realized the importance of the social rule. Actually, when she and her friends threw snowballs, they didn’t care it was fair or unfair to do it at passing cars. Fortunately, she realized there’re rules to obey in a game such as running and she gains true excitement when she plays a game obeying the rule through a driver’s chasing. For example, she said “We all played by the rules,” and she really felt excitement and then respected him by saying “sainted man,” or “our hero” because he was true winner by the rule in the chase.
Thursday, April 10, 2008
Champion of the World by Maya Angelou
Thesis: I will be writing an narration essay on the day Jeo Louis fought a white contender at boxing game.
T.S: According to Maya Angelou, there're lots of challenge for black people in Amerca to get over segregation.
-Maya Angelou, Champion of the world, p. 88-90
First, all of black people in America wanted to get over their segreagtion even if they had little power.
- All the Negroes around the world who sat swating and praying, glued to their "Master's voice."
-Maya Angelou, Champion of the world, p. 89
Second, even though white people as the majority segregated them, black people tried to get over segregation not throwing in the towel.
- He's got Louis against the ropes and now it's a left to the body and a right to the ribs. My race groaned. It was our people falling. It was another lynching...
-Maya Angelou, Champion of the world, p. 89
Third, black people proved they are worthy of having the equality of human rights with white people.
- The winnah, and still heavyweight champeen of the world ...Joe Louis.
-Maya Angelou, Champion of the world, p. 90